Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer Write letter to Mrs Barrett in your letter Suggest how you could help her in her home Say why you would like to do this work Explain when you will and will not be available Begin your letter as follow : Dear Mrs Barrett,

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Dear Mrs Barrett, I am writing regarding your recent advertisement in the local newspaper mentioned your requirement of home helper in your home. My name is Jen Kale, and I am a university student pursuing my post-graduation. I would like to know about the in which type of work I could assist you with. I can help you with home cleaning, doing laundry and

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assist you in cooking.

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, I can be with you for groceries-shopping.As I am doing

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type of work at my to help my mother. Next summer I want to start some part-time computer class, which is supposed to be beneficial for my career. I would like to help you with your house chaos in terms of extra income to pay my computer class fees. I can assist you every Monday to Friday from 12.00 pm to 4.00 pm as I do a family visit during weekends. I would appreciate to meet you in person for

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discussion about the position. Looking for your favourable response. Yours faithfully, Jen Kale

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

175 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Domestic chores
Culinary skills
Horticulture
Cultural immersion
Work ethic
Flexible schedule
Time management
Prior commitments
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