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Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State which you consider to be the most effective.

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I can say radio,television and newspapers as
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 for
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 transmission. Of ,course these have their advantages and disadvantages. I think they are the most effective way to get
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. The first advantage of
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 is
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 can deliver
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 immediately and up-to-date because they reach long distances and help to know cultures.
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, they are used to inform,educate entertain and promote. They are usually free or low-cost. By now, the
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 obtained through
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 and social networks has become a constant need in every person's life.
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,
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 has a great role in our social life.
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 , it was shown that the main reason why parents buy a computer and provide their children with the internet is the benefit of education. The
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 has its place in the educational process.
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, they do not transmit
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 in and personalized way and they rarely allow feedback or audience interaction.
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, in some ,cases they transmit false
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 that can be used .
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, if we trust the
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 and get fooled , we may lose something tomorrow. WE should always use the
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 when necessary and not get too attached to it.
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, it was found that despite the great opportunity to use the knowledge provided by the new
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, especially the internet, most young people play games, chat with friends, and download music and movies from the computer and the internet
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 managed to create both positive and negative effects. They are able to promote behavioural customs or traditions related to the quality of life.
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