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The map and chart below show the information for the global willingness to eat insect products and the current price for certain food available on the market place. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The map and chart below show the information for the global willingness to eat insect products and the current price for certain food available on the market place. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The world map represents the popularity of insect-based products across the globe and the bar graph illustrates the cost of certain foods nowadays in the market.
Overall
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, we can see that the highest percentage of insect-based
food
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 is consumed in Mexico
while
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 the least is in Russia, and all other places are moderate users.
On the other hand
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, Wild Weaver Ant is the most expensive
food
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 and Rice (Thai Hom Mali) is the least expensive. The Global Map shows that
the
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apply
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insect-based
food
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 is very popular amongst Mexicans and places like Peru and Thailand who show a willingness to eat at around 50 to 70%
whereas
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 the least is seen in places like Japan, Russia, Spain, Uk India , Australia and Africa with the percentage of willingness to consume
such
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food
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 ranges between 20 to 40 %. China is the only intermediate user with 44% of willingness. We can see that insect-based foods are more expensive per kg when compared to conventional non-vegetarian
food
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 like beef and pork which
at
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 least 3 times less than the highest-priced insect-based
food
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words food with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global willingness
  • insect products
  • current prices
  • marketplace
  • highlighting significant patterns
  • outliers
  • regions
  • discrepancy
  • non-insect-based food items
  • general pattern
  • comparisons
  • notable differences
  • traditional food items
  • main trends
  • implications
  • further research
  • consumption
  • price variation
  • food availability
  • significant
  • observed
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