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The pie charts below show the number of native speakers of different languages in Canada in 1996, 2006, and 2016.

The pie charts below show the number of native speakers of different languages in Canada in 1996, 2006, and 2016.
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The pie charts illustrate the native people who speak different languages in Canada in 1976 , 2006 and 2016.
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 , half of the native folk speak in English over the period.
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 the ratio of French speakers decreased significantly.
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, the other non-official languages spoken by natives increased. As can be seen, in 1996, 60% of Canadian speak English. After the ratio declined slightly to 2% and reached 57% in 2016 .
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 , 23% of people who live in Canada that they had a native language
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French. There was a gradual decline in the number of people from about 23 % to 21% in 1996 and 2016 respectively.
On the other hand
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 , 17% of native speakers spoke non-official languages in 1996 .
On the contrary
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 , there was a progressive increase from 20% and 22% in the years 2006 and 2016

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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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