The pie charts below show the number of native speakers of different languages in Canada in 1996, 2006, and 2016.

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The pie charts illustrate the native people who speak different languages in Canada in 1976 , 2006 and 2016.

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, half of the native folk speak in English over the period.

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the ratio of French speakers decreased significantly.

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, the other non-official languages spoken by natives increased. As can be seen, in 1996, 60% of Canadian speak English. After the ratio declined slightly to 2% and reached 57% in 2016 .

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, 23% of people who live in Canada that they had a native language

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French. There was a gradual decline in the number of people from about 23 % to 21% in 1996 and 2016 respectively.

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, 17% of native speakers spoke non-official languages in 1996 .

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, there was a progressive increase from 20% and 22% in the years 2006 and 2016

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The pie charts below show the number of native speakers of different languages in Canada in 1996, 2006, and 2016.

More and more children are accessing the Internet unsupervised. This can sometimes put them at risk. What problems do you think parents face when dealing with their children using the Internet? How can this problem be solved?

Some parents think that giving expensive gifts to children creating bad habits. do you agree or disagree

It is inevitable that traditional cultures will be lost as technology develops. Technology and traditional cultures are incompatible.

Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed down. Others, however, believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals.

some people believe that schools should teach students how to fight and physically defend themselves while others think it causes many problems for the youth. what is your opinion?