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Describe a friend you enjoy talking with. You should say: Who is he/she? How long you two are friends? What you do together? And explain why she/he is your best friend?

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I'm going to talk about Thu, who was a former colleague of mine back in the day when I was working for a technology firm in Hanoi. So, we've known each other for donkey's years, and I think we first met in 2016. We were working in the same department and got on really well, we really hit it off from the start. She is the person I can share everything with and that's the reason I adore her so much. She is cheerful, attractive, and optimistic. She is simply gorgeous with a bright and charming skin colour and slim body. She's arguably the most intelligent girl I've ever met, I mean she's sharp, really sharp. She's pretty gregarious but very focussed. Anyway, she left that company to set up her own business, and she made a real success of it. She went from being one woman to now having a team of 50 and being known as one of the leading technology firms in her area.
However
, what I liked about talking to her was her optimistic attitude and genuine interest in getting to know me. She was easy to chat with and had fantastic humour. It was pleasant to encounter someone who was so open-minded about their career and life that they were ready to share their knowledge with others. So as I said, I feel extremely proud of her, because she deserved to do well. I am sure she will continue to grow and do well. It was a delight to meet someone who was both motivating and enjoyable to be around, and I'm happy to have
such
 a best friend!
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