The table describes the changes of people who went to international travel in 1990, 1995, 200 and 2005 (million)

The table describes the changes of people who went to international travel in 1990, 1995, 200 and 2005 (million)
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The given table demonstrates the changes in international
travellers
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from 1990 to 2005 in different five countries.
Overall
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, at the beginning of the year, people in America accounted for the highest change compared to other nations
while
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those figures experienced a decrease in the following years.
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, Europe remained a slow increase during the years. It is clearly seen that from 1990 to 1995, the number of African
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increased by only 2.6. Which was 28.7 in 2005.
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, people who travelled internationally in America showed an upward trend of 680.5 they experienced a downward trend of 113.2 in 2005.
Travellers
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from Asia and the Pacific countries increased from 60.2 to 135.8 respectively during five years. Regarding Europe and Middle West, they displayed two opposing figures that European
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reached 280.2 to 400.2 dramatically at the beginning and
at the end
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of the year.
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, Middle West started to rise from 9.8 to 15.8 in 2006. Total figures showed the highest level started at 448.9 and peaked at 693.7.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • significant increase
  • international travel
  • popular destinations
  • economic growth
  • technological advancements
  • ease of travel
  • cultural exchange
  • globalization
  • fluctuations
  • trend
  • millions of travelers
  • annual growth rate
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