the map below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site
The city of Norbiton is planning to transform the industrial area into a residential field. All the factories are going to be removed, and those areas are going to be used to build houses and public areas. In the following paragraph, it is going to be explained how
this
project is going to end.
First of all, a roundabout is going to be built at the entrance to allow everybody to get access to this
new village. Once people get into the space, they are going to find medical care on the right side and the shops on the left. They are going to be facing, being divided.
Continuing the second roundabout is going to have 2 exits. The first exit takes them to some houses, playground
and schools. On the third exit, the community can go to the end of the range crossing a bridge Fix the agreement mistake
playgrounds
that is
going to be constructed to find one of the biggest houses that are in the farmland space.
This
transformation of the industrial area is going to allow many families to have homes and be able to take their kids to school, and fun areas.Submitted by cagriffith on
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