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Band 4.5

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The
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 maps exhibit Colwick Arts Centre in 2005 and its alterations till now. It is evident that a lot is changed, including new buildings and planting trees. Cinema and Concert Hall which used to be in the centre as a single building was demolished, and they were divided into
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 segregated buildings. Notably Concert Hall is replaced by an enormous salon placed on the eastern side next to the Cinema
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 on the northern side. In the middle of the complex,Central Exhibition Area is created which is in front of the Information Desk that remained in the previous place.
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 Galleries are moved to the western side at the opposite point of the prior position and they are combined as
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construction is situated the near cafe is added to the complex as a new facility
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 of a Snack Bar. What is more, the Drama Studio was added near to meeting rooms which are established in
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 separate halls in the northeast corner
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 it used to be a single salon in the west flank between Snack Bar and the toilet. The advantageous space is expanded into Southern parts in which were no facilities and a huge flourishing area is created by planting trees. So, it is obvious Colwick Arts Centre is really broadened and got bigger.

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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • pattern
  • comparison
  • contrast
  • similarity
  • difference
  • fluctuation
  • outlier
  • exception
  • significant
  • noteworthy
  • highlight
  • summarize
  • data
  • feature
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