In nowadays
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most
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children
are spending a lot of time on their mobile
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each day.
This
has several detrimental effects on them.
Although
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it has
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, I think it should be regarded as a negative development.
At
first,
as
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technology
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and all
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gadgets like smartphones are available in every
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also
in everybody's hand. It become a crucial part of each individual's
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and use it but people don’t have
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,
children
are wasting their time by using mobile in order to play games or watch videos. Not only
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distract them and glue them to the phone, but
also
they forget to do their tasks and homework .
Moreover
, the screen lights can damage their quality of sleep.
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they
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at home and do not go out and socialize with other
children
. That will cause health
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like obesity and mental issue like
.
On the other hand
,
this
development
causeWrong verb form
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a huge revolution in different aspects of our
life
. Most
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people are now using Google meets to connect to their coworker and their boss so that they can work at home and take care of their
children
.
Furthermore
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communication is now available in every
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. So,
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can call, text or video call with their friend because
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mobile phones are not only portable but
also
it doesn’t cost a fortune.
In conclusion,
children
are addicted to their smartphones which can cause lots of health and mental problem. It should
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that
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this
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our
life
much better if we use it
.
That is
why
this
claim is the case.