Some people say that Art ( eg Painting, Music, Poetry) can be made by everyone whereas others believe that it can only be made by those with special ability. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Art is a way of expressing
ones
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one's
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emotions and abilities. There is a common notion that art is only for people who
has
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an
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apply
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expertise in
this
field.
While
others believe that for having
an artistic skills
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artistic skills
an artistic skill
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one does not have to be in
this
field full-time,
that is
, it does not require a person to be an artist at all.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal expression
  • emotional expression
  • mastering techniques
  • innate talent
  • therapeutic benefits
  • healing and personal growth
  • democratization of art
  • cultural valuation
  • artistic perception
  • art education
  • latent talent
  • economic factors
  • craftsmanship
  • creative process
  • artistic merit
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