The graph above shows the stock price of four technology companies between 2011 and 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Information about the
stock
price
of four companies in the span of five years is presented by a line graph.
The value of the stock
price
of Google stays the lowest without any drastic changes for the whole period starting from 2011 and ending in 2016. The values of Apple see the most dramatic change increasing seven times in one year and then
experiencing an extreme drop to around 7, 000 just two thousand more than the value from the start. These changes are followed by a slight rise and a dip ending in a value slightly higher than 5,000. Yahoo’s stock
price
is decreasing steadily for the whole five years going from seven and a half thousand to two and a half thousand contrasting is Facebook’s stock
price
, which in 2011 is the same as Yahoos
, gradually increasing to 20,000 dollars.Fix the agreement mistake
Yahoo
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