You are a student who wants to apply to the Green Pines College. You are experiencing financial problems at the moment. Write a letter to the Principal of the College explaining your situation and ask for information on scholarships or other means of financial help available.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

this

letter to let you know that I am a destitute learner who wants to continue my

further

education at Green pines college. Currently, I am facing financial hardship. I hope you are in a position to help me in

this

regard. My name is Payal Vyas and I completed secondary school

last

year and hoping to study at Green pines college.My favourite subject is Human Resource Management. Unfortunately, my financial background does not allow me to continue with the application. I would really appreciate it if you could help me with some scholarships or any other financial support. I am very good at studies and secured 95% at the secondary level. I have included my address and a reference from my previous teacher for your consideration. I would like to let you know that I am available for one-on-one interaction in needed. Thank you for reading

this

letter and I expect a positive reply from you. Yours sincerely Payal Vyas

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You are a student who wants to apply to the Green Pines College. You are experiencing financial problems at the moment. Write a letter to the Principal of the College explaining your situation and ask for information on scholarships or other means of financial help available.

The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree of disagree with this opinion?

Big salary is much more imporant than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?

Large companies use sporting events to promote their products. Some people think this has a negative impact on sports. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays people get married and have kids in their thirties rather than when they are younger. Do you agree or disagree that this trend will benefit society?