The diagram shows the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram process illustrates the manufacturing stages of cement and how they utilise it to make concrete for infrastructures.
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, Cement production is a linear process consisting of four main stages: crushing, mixing, heating in a rotating chamber, and grinding. Linking Words
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concrete involves a mechanical mixer to create the end product.
The first is to combine the two raw materials Linking Words
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as limestone and clay to crush into powder. Once they are pounded, the powder will pass through a mixer before it goes to the chamber of the rotating heater to remove the moisture. After the heating stage, a grinding process will take place and will produce the item. At Linking Words
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point, the cement can be sealed in a bag.
The manufactured binding agent will Linking Words
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be portioned about 15%, mix it along water (10%), sand (25%), and gravel (50%) into a concrete mixer. The purpose of Linking Words
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is for the evaporation to take place. Linking Words
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, the final step is when the water has evaporated out of the mixture, the concrete will be ready to use in building infrastructures.Linking Words
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