Some people think it's bettere to choose friendsط who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe its good to have frinends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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There is no doubt that these days a friend is the main part of our life . Some
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believe it is better to choose
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who always have the same opinions as them. Other
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think it is good to have friendships who sometimes disagree with them. In
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and I will draw my opinion on
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argument. First of all , there are various reasons that
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thought though it is better to choose
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who have the same thinking and opinion. Sharing and
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same views is the main reason
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issue. Friendships feel more enjoyable with each other
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if they have the same opinions.
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, if they decided to do a new project , they will share similar ideas to a grateful and successful project. What is more , some
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prefer
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who have the same ideas and opinions because they support each other when they want to enter any new skills in their life.
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,
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believe to choose
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who have a different opinion for many reasons. The main reason is different and wide ideas.
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leads them to creative a wonderful choice if they want to do something new in their life. Added to that, they know in more detail if it is right or not .
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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