The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.

The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.
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The diagram illustrates information about a linear
process
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of generating electricity in a hydroelectric energy plant.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the
process
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commences with the flow of
water
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from the river to a reservoir and finishes with the transmission of electricity to the national grid.
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, the whole
process
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can be categorized into day-time activities and night-time ones. Regarding the day-time
process
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, the
water
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which is from the river fills the high-level reservoir which has a dam. The dam is open during the day to let
water
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go to the station in order to generate electricity or be kept in the low-level reservoir to will be used at night.
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, there are two turbines in the power station which day-time one activates the generator to generate the power line for the national grid. Alongside the daily
process
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, there is another route at night.
Water
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in the power station has two different purposes; the night-time aim is that another turbine pumps
water
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from the low-level storage into the high-level one to fill the amount of
water
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behind the dam to accelerate the aforementioned
process
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.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words process, water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Reservoir
  • Penstock
  • Turbine
  • Generator
  • Transformer
  • High voltage
  • Renewable energy
  • Kinetic energy
  • Potential energy
  • Power grid
  • Sustainable
  • Flow rate
  • Energy conversion
  • Hydraulic pressure
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