The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps illustrate the design of Grange
Park
in the year 1920 when it was established and its form in the present time.
Overall
, there have been many significant
changes
in all parts except the two main entrances. In the past, there were more gardens and outdoor places for doing various activities
while
there are more buildings nowadays. One obvious change is the fountain in the centre of the
park
was destroyed and a
rose
garden
which is surrounded by some seats has been built
instead
. To the northeast of the
park
, there were a
rose
garden
and a pond for water plants which are converted into a cafe and the children’s play area, respectively. Below them, seats and the glasshouse were demolished and a water feature is constructed which is on the underground car
park
entrance.
In addition
to the
changes
in the centre and the east side of the
park
, some other
changes
have occurred to the opposite side. One drastic is the music stage is replaced with an Amphitheatre for concerts.
While
the
rose
garden
to the northwest of the
park
remains in the same location, another
rose
garden
near the south entrance
as well as
all seats to the west have been removed. As can be seen,
in addition
to that
rose
garden
, two main entrances remain without any
changes
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • alterations
  • renovations
  • modernize
  • upgraded
  • transformed
  • landscaping
  • facilities
  • amenities
  • preservation
  • heritage
  • green spaces
  • eco-friendly
  • public space
  • community impact
  • historical elements
  • conservation
  • recreational areas
  • urban planning
  • sustainable development
  • layout
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