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People often do not interact with their neighbours and this is harming community building. What are the possible causes and solutions? ‌

#people #neighbours #community
It is irrefutable that neighbourhood building is being damaged as individuals are not interconnecting with the next doors for most of
time
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. In my opinion, there are
plethora
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 of reasons for
this
 disturbing tendency but
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handul
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handful
 of possible measures will mitigate
this
 problem.
To begin
 with, the first and foremost reason for
this
 case is the advancement in
the
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technology that provides
manu
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many
 facilities to the masses for spending their time at home. To explain, people
plays
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 games
as well as
 do chatting and
texting
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 with their friends to utilize their leisure period.
In addition
 to
this
, watching television is
also
 one of the reasons
of
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this
 scenario.
For example
, a survey was conducted at Punjabi University in India, in which 70 per cent of
human
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 stay at home for viewing television
instead
 of interacting with their
nearones
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neurones
near ones
.
On the other hand
, there are a huge number of ways to tackle
this
 issue.
Firstly
, people should go out for
walk
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a walk
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 in their nearby
locality
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 park.
This
 will benefit their health
along with
 building their relation with society members.
Secondly
, individuals should participate in any function which is organized by the community people.
As a result
 of
this
, they will spend some quality time with each other and get some
relax
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 from their busy schedules.
To sum up
,
although
 there are a number of reasons for
this
 tendency, taking some reasoning steps will help to resolve
this
 issue,
thus
 will lead to
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 conclusion.
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