The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the transformation of a public library’s floor plan over the course of two decades.
Overall
, the library has undergone significant changes to create a more child-friendly environment and incorporate modern technology.
Upon entering, the central area
, previously occupied by seating, now functions as an open passage. To the left of the entrance, the former reading room
for newspapers and magazines is replaced by a dedicated computer room
. On the right side, a café is taken the place of the previous enquiry desk.
Continuing past the café, the section that once housed adult non-fiction books
is changed into an information desk area
with self-service machines. To the left of this
area
, the space that used to contain adult fiction books
now accommodates all reference books
. The adult fiction collection is relocated, sharing space with the information desk area
.
Walking up to the end of the passage, on the left is a spacious room
allocated for children’s fiction books
and storytelling events, accompanied by sofas. This
particular space was previously a small storage area
for CDs, movies, and computer games. On the right side, a lecture room
is replaced the
former location of children’s Change preposition
by the
books
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