The chart below gives information about the number of social networking sites people used in Canada in 2014 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevan
The chart illustrates the percentage of using social media
sities
by Canadian people in 2014 and 2015.
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sites
It is clear that
the most proportion of using network
took place on one Correct article usage
the network
site
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side
,
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apply
while
using five sites
by far was lowest
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the lowest
percent
in both years .
One site had the highest Change the spelling
per cent
using
of Replace the word
use
network
, at about 36% and 28%, for 2014 and 2015, respectively. Add an article
the network
a network
while
using any sites
went down just by1
% in 2015. By Correct your spelling
by 1
contrats
, the percentage of using two Correct your spelling
contrast
sites
rose from 23% in 2014, 24
% in 2015.
The proportion of people using more than two Change preposition
to 24
sites
were
below 20% in both years, Change the verb form
was
while
using more than two sites
rose daramatically
in 2015. Using five Correct your spelling
dramatically
sites
increased double in 2015.Submitted by alizadehfaeze1991 on
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