Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argued that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There has been an ongoing debate about the attitudes toward hard
situations
like unsatisfactory
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or shortage of money.
While
some people advocate it is better to accept their bad
situations
, others propose we have to try and overcome bad
situations
.
This
essay will discuss the issue from both sides. On the one hand, there are some plausible reasons why some people argue that we should accept
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negative
situations
that can happen in our life.
To begin
with, their most convincing reason is there would be no better way than
current
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situation
. It is true that
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bad
situations
always could happen. So if we face a negative
situation
like low money or unsatisfactory with
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workplace, it is the best way to accept the
situation
. We should admit our reality and try to forget bad
situations
through other activities
such
as enjoying
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hobby.
In other words
, we have to try to ignore negative things and focus on happy things. Sometimes getting away with bad
situations
can be a good solution.
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the other hand, the other side of the argument is
also
reasonable. The most compelling reason why we have to try to against
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the
situation
such
as shortage of money is the stress from those
situations
will be a pressure
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us
in
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every time. If we do not try to escape from those
situations
, our quality of life will gradually deteriorate. So we should try to improve our own bad
situations
and bravely solve them. What is more, these bad conditions will continue to happen. And we can not accept all of them
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if we do not solve each
problems
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. We have to face them
instead
avoiding
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of avoiding
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them. In my opinion, I
also
think we should face them. If we accept every bad
situation
and live with everything on our
back
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, we will eventually fall apart. We should learn how to deal with
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difficult
situations
and how to fight them.
Then
, we can solve many hard
situations
that happen in our life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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