The table shows the local caches and imports of fresh fish into Perth, Australia, 2004 and 2014.
The provided data in the table illustrates the trends in local fresh
fish
caught and imported in Perth over a ten-year period (2004-2014).
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Overall
, from 2004 to 2014 more fresh Linking Words
fish
was imported rather than caught. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, the local fresh Linking Words
fish
caught in Perth grew exponentially, Use synonyms
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conversely
the figure for imported Add a comma
,conversely
fish
fluctuated through the years.
In 2004 the local Use synonyms
fish
had a figure of 2677. 7 metric Use synonyms
tons
, from that year until 2008 the Use synonyms
number
rose exponentially, reaching, the same year, its peak at 8136. 2 metric Use synonyms
tons
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However
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this
increase was followed by a decrease the year after (in 2009), with a data of 7844. 9 metric Linking Words
tons
. It Use synonyms
then
fell sharply, Linking Words
by
having a level of 4739. 9 metric Change preposition
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tons
in 2013, except for a tiny upswing in 2014 (5031. 9 metric Use synonyms
tons
).
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On the contrary
, the Linking Words
number
of imports during Use synonyms
this
period fluctuated significantly. The highest level of imports into Perth happened in 2012, with 1227. 3 metric Linking Words
tons
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while
the lowest in 2005, with solely 231. 6 metric Linking Words
tons
, smaller than the lowest Use synonyms
number
for local fresh Use synonyms
fish
, at 2677. 7 metric Use synonyms
tons
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On the other hand
, with the only exception of 2005, 2006 and 2008, there were more imported Linking Words
fish
rather than local ones. Use synonyms
Lastly
, the highest total Linking Words
number
of fresh Use synonyms
fish
(either caught or imported) was in 2009, with a Use synonyms
number
of 8949 metric Use synonyms
tons
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