The table shows the local caches and imports of fresh fish into Perth, Australia, 2004 and 2014.
The provided data in the table illustrates the trends in local fresh
fish
caught and imported in Perth over a ten-year period (2004-2014).
Overall
, from 2004 to 2014 more fresh fish
was imported rather than caught. Furthermore
, the local fresh fish
caught in Perth grew exponentially, conversely
the figure for imported Add a comma
,conversely
fish
fluctuated through the years.
In 2004 the local fish
had a figure of 2677. 7 metric tons
, from that year until 2008 the number
rose exponentially, reaching, the same year, its peak at 8136. 2 metric tons
. However
, this
increase was followed by a decrease the year after (in 2009), with a data of 7844. 9 metric tons
. It then
fell sharply, by
having a level of 4739. 9 metric Change preposition
apply
tons
in 2013, except for a tiny upswing in 2014 (5031. 9 metric tons
).
On the contrary
, the number
of imports during this
period fluctuated significantly. The highest level of imports into Perth happened in 2012, with 1227. 3 metric tons
, while
the lowest in 2005, with solely 231. 6 metric tons
, smaller than the lowest number
for local fresh fish
, at 2677. 7 metric tons
. On the other hand
, with the only exception of 2005, 2006 and 2008, there were more imported fish
rather than local ones. Lastly
, the highest total number
of fresh fish
(either caught or imported) was in 2009, with a number
of 8949 metric tons
.Submitted by cecconisofia2002 on
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