In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
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can own anything that they want if they are trying hard.
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owning things if they try hard. Use synonyms
Firstly
, feeling happy about what they did to get the thing and Linking Words
secondly
, it helps in future when the child grows up so he or she can control him/herself with no helps from others. Linking Words
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do anything to have the things they want it. Use synonyms
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move his legs because of a bike accident. Use synonyms
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, it's difficult for my cousin to own whatever he wants.
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To conclude
, achieving everything might have a few effects and disadvantages. Linking Words
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, there are more nice advantages to owning everything by trying hard enough.Linking Words
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