Some people think that the money used to preserve historic buildings and artefacts should came from goverment funds, while others believe that private organisations and individuals should pay for this. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There are different viewpoints regarding where the money for conserving long-standing buildings and

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should come from.

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some hold the opinion that authority must take care of these payments, the better way is to let private enterprises and individuals

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finance

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. It is true that state funds are important to preserve all artefacts and historical property. All

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and historical buildings are cultural treasures, and these make the rich heritage of the country. Sustainable money coming from the authority will

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all the artefacts intact, plus, people may come and sightsee and create money back for the state.

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, the American government spends a large expenditure every year to protect the

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just for their citizen to watch and use them for evidence of their history.

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, private organizations and individuals will be better at preserving historical buildings and relics than authorities. The private companies will conserve relics carefully and spend a tremendous of expenditure because they will make a profit from them by selling sightseeing tickets.

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, the artefacts will have more opportunities to reach visitors and

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innovate quickly if damaged.

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, historical museums owned by private organizations always

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a lot of tourists because of the diversity and good condition of the

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In conclusion, there are some advantages for the state to pay the preservation fees,

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, I consider that private companies should finance these payments because they do the conservation better. There is a better way to resolve

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the government

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should support private organizations,

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helping them do the conserve job better.