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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion

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A subset of individuals say that
music
 is a bridge
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connecting cultures and generations. I totally agree with that statement because
music
 is a global language and it has the magic to bring different
people
 together.
Although
, various nations have their own type of
music
 and they are totally different from each other from melody to vocals. K-pop, Indian,
Hawain
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Hawaiian
, and Spanish are some of the main types of
music
 that can easily recognize.
Music
, melodies, and Instruments show a huge variety
according to
 their country's culture.
However
, there are no rules that
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people
 must listen to their own cultural
music
.
It is clear that
people
 like to
listen
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 another culture's
music
 because it is new and hits in different ways. As an example, most Americans like to
listen
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 K-pop songs more than English songs. Because of
this
 thing,
people
 start to gather despite their nationalities and traditions. The only reason for their gathering is just their affection for the same kind of
music
.
On the other hand
,
music
 gets together the different ages of
people
 because of their musical sense. There is no doubt, that there is a huge gap between generations nowadays.
Nevertheless
,
music
 can stand as a gap filler for
this
 problem. For the fact that some young adults from the modern era as a large inspiration for old
music
,
while
 some oldies like to
listen
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 new songs.
This
 could help to bring generations together.
Overall
, I believe that
music
 can make different cultures and
people
 from different age groups together
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 since it is a pill for happiness and social distance.
Submitted by skn  on

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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