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Describe an important river or lake in your country. You should say: Where it is located? How big/long it is? What is look like? And explain why it is important?

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Speaking of a
lake
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 in Vietnam
that is
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 important, it would definitely be
West
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Lake
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.
This
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lake
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 has a great meaning to the local people
as well as
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 to my childhood. It is situated in the
west
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 of the capital,
West
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Lake
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 has long been one of the symbols of Hanoi, an image of childhood in the minds of any Hanoians. The name "
West
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" of the
lake
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 is directly gotten from the
West
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 district, where
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lake
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 is located. It's arguably the largest local
lake
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 I've ever met, I mean it's huge, really huge. We can see it clearly on the map,
for example
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, the Google Map application on the smartphone, and it is like a giant water tank of the capital. When it comes to the reason why I felt it is important, well, is because previously, it became part of my memories. When I was a kid, my father often takes me to
this
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lake
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 to swim on hot summer days. Was a little nervous at
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but eventually I got used to it, and really enjoyed swimming in the
lake
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. It made me relax and stay healthy.
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,
West
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Lake
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 is a meeting place when it comes to special occasions, hosting many important events in a variety of fields,
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 as Running Competitions, Bike Racing, and Kayaking Contests. Recently,
West
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Lake
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 has changed quite a lot with the advent of buildings and new houses in the surroundings.
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, the nature of the local
lake
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 here remains unchanged as it is still nostalgic and cosy. In the future, I continue to live here.
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 is simply because
this
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lake
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 has been a part of my mind for all my life until now and it will always be.
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