Some believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Some occupations,
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as doctors and engineers, need some advanced training to achieve higher
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. Several pieces of training are different respective each area. Because of that, some
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believe that they should
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where they took their educations. Personally, I have a stance that everyone has their own free will to
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everywhere they want, even if it must be in other locations. We will discuss these two opinions.
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, every
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in the world has different geographical
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. That differences give unique
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for natural resource availability, and they will make direct impacts on their societies.
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that differences, every
country
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has its own specialities in the knowledge aspect.
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, everyone will have choices to take their courses based on each
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's specialities. In an ideal condition,
people
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who take certain curriculums based on specific abilities should be required to
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in the same field as their
competencies
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and in the same place where they took their education. Many
people
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agree with
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statement because it will make
people
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easier to adapt and master certain things. There are some
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that immigrant-oriented. In these
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, jobs will be more secure as the government will guarantee the occupation for each immigrant based on their abilities.
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, the
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availability of each
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also
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has different
conditions
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. In strict
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with no chance of jobs for foreigners or
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with economic difficulties, it will be hard for
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seekers to get a
job
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. To face
this
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condition, many jobseekers search for other opportunities in different
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, even if they must be different from their capabilities. To tackle
this
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obstacle, many immigrants and employees take other courses in recipient
countries
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to keep up their
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with the local workforce, especially doctors. In conclusion, professionals should
work
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in the
countries
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where they took training, as
people
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will be easier to adapt and master their own field. But, we can't deny that every
countries
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have different geographical and
job
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availability
conditions
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. Those factors influence the workforce to follow each
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's
conditions
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to get occupations. Favour
conditions
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will make
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seekers do their
job
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the same as their
competencies
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,
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otherwise
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unfavoured
conditions
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will make employees do things that differ from their own abilities. In my personal view,
due to
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these factors, everyone has the choice to choose where they will
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and get a salary, both because of their own free will or forced by
conditions
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.
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