The graph below shows the average numbers of Vietnamese students studying in France, Russia and America between 2000 and 2015.
The given line graph gives information about the mean figure of
students
from Vietnam pursuing their education in France
, Russia
and America, from 2000 to 2015.
As an overall
assessment, it can be clearly seen that the popularity of America has increased among students
over the period of 15 years, with almost 500 thousand of them studying there in 2015. Despite France
being the most preferred country by enlistment initially
, America surpasses it between 2005 and 2010.
In 2000, around 1.5 million
students
are educating themselves in the USA. This
amount witnesses a steady increase till 2010, before it jumped to reach its culmination at 5 million
, the highest among all other categories. France
and Russia
observed approximately 3.5 and 3 million
Vietnamese students
in 2000.
However
, both these figures dropped massively between 2000 and 2005. Following that, this
figure remained stagnant for France
, but it took a downturn for Russia
. However
, the scenario for France
changed in 2010, when it witnessed a huge rise in number of students
between 2010 and 2015, bringing the figure to almost 4.5 million
. Similarly
, a slow increment was also
observed in Russia
, though not as steep as in France
, leaving its student count just below its start which is 2.75 million
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