Describe a contest/competition you would like to participate in. You should say: What the contest/ competition is about? Where the contest/ competition will take place? When it will be held? And explain why you would like to participate.

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I would like to participate in the painting

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. When I was in my schooling days, I used to compete in a lot of contests. Because my dad told me that I should at least have one hobby which interests me so I was much into contests, especially painting and drawing. There are numerous competitions,

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as acting, poetry writing, cooking, and painting. Individuals from all provinces in Vietnam are welcome to participate.

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year, my friend won first place in a cooking

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. As I mentioned before, I am very good at drawing and painting. So, I would love to compete in a painting

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and try to do my best and win a prize. The

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for the painting is sponsored by VINFAST, unique electric production, and sales in Vietnam,

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, it is only announced on the VINFAST fan page. It was scheduled to be held

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of October

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year, with a very special theme: "For A Green Future". The reason that I would like to participate in painting or drawing is a relaxing art form for me. Every one of my friends and family members knows how much I enjoy painting. Painting is my hobby, whenever I have time, I start drawing sketches or taking nature pictures.

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, I was eager to participate in the upcoming

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, I'm looking forward to the contest

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year so that I can participate and possibly win a prize.

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Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

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Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

246 words

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