Some people think cities are the best place to live. Others prefer to live in the countryside. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some
people
think living in urban is the best place to live but other people
have different think that living in rural is better. The writer will talk about two problems and talk about my own opinion. The first is living in an urban. When people
live there will have many advantages. For ,example people
can have a good environment to study
in and give us a qualification which has people
find a good job with a high salary but when people
work
in urban, work
time
or study
time
will be more than in rural so they can feel exhausted after work
or study
. Turning to the landscape of urban, in the evening, people
who live in urban can see beautiful landscapes with many different colours of light in all skyscrapers which is a relaxing time
for people
living there. The second is living in rural. Different from urban, rural have few good schools to studying
and can not find good jobs with high salaries but Wrong verb form
study
work
or study
in there need not work
or study
more time
because maybe some families in rural did not have much money to study
. When people
in rural have that problem, they will take a son to work
on the farm like looking after a bull. Besides
that rural usually have fresh air and many time
rural are relaxing time
for people
in there. In conclusion, two problems have advantages and disadvantages but if you want to have fresh air, they will live in rural but if they want to have a good job, they will live in urban. In my opinion, I prefer living in rural than urban because live in there I do not have illness or sickness.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite