THe line graph below shows the average monthly temperatures in three major cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
This
line graph illustrates the average temperature
per month in three different cities, Paris
, Dubai
, and Sydoney
. Correct your spelling
Sydney
Overall
, Sydney was the hottest in summer time
, Correct your spelling
summertime
while
Paris
was the coldest in winter time
. Correct your spelling
wintertime
Moreover
, the temperature
record in Sydoney
followed Correct your spelling
Sydney
a
opposite pattern as Correct article usage
the
other
countries.
Focusing on the results of Change preposition
in other
survey
about Add an article
a survey
the survey
temperature
in Add an article
the temperature
Dubai
and Paris
, Dubai
was around 19 degree
Fix the agreement mistake
degrees
on
January, recording the lowest Change preposition
in
teperature
throughout the whole time frame. Over the next seven months, Correct your spelling
temperature
Dubai
's temperature
was the highest, reaching a peak of appproximately
36 Correct your spelling
approximately
degree
. After August, Change to a plural noun
degrees
Dubai
's temperature
decreased to around 23 degree
in December. Change to a plural noun
degrees
On the other hand
, Paris
' temperature
record followed quite a fairly similar pattern as Dubai
's, recording at
Correct your spelling
a
maximum
Correct article usage
a maximum
20
Change preposition
of 20
degree
Change to a plural noun
degrees
on
Jun and July, Change preposition
in
minimum
Correct article usage
a minimum
five
Change preposition
of five
dgree
Correct your spelling
degrees
on
January and December.
Turning to the Change preposition
in
temperature
record in Sydney, there
winter season and summer season were Correct your spelling
their
oppiste
Correct your spelling
opposite
as
Change preposition
of
other
Correct article usage
the other
twe
countries. It started Correct your spelling
two
the
with
24 Change preposition
at
degree
Change to a plural noun
degrees
on
January and declined Change preposition
in
at
15 Change preposition
to
degree
in July, which was the lowest Change to a plural noun
degrees
levels
of Fix the agreement mistake
level
there
records. After that point, Correct your spelling
their
temperature
Add an article
the temperature
was
increased slightly to 23 Unnecessary verb
apply
degree
Change to a plural noun
degrees
in
Change preposition
at
end
of the year.Add an article
the end
Submitted by songcheng619 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Vocabulary: Replace the words temperature, paris, dubai, degree with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
▼