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Some people believe that reading is always a good habit. Others feel it depends on which books a person is reading. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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Some people see that reading
books
 is always a useful habit as it increases their knowledge,
while
 others think that it depends on which book the reader chooses as some
books
 reading it causes problems in peoples life.In my point of view, it depends on the
type
 of
books
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book
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. Some human beings support the idea of reading and encourage new generations to make it a habit because they think that it is a good habit. They think it
increaceses
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increases
 their knowledge and
make
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 the reader think
out
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outside
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 of
a
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the
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 box.
For instance
,
professor
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Professor
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 Ibrahim Adel the owner of
Z-American
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the Z-American
a Z-American
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english
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 app encourages youth to read different
books
such
 as
books
 for improving their habits like
book
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books
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 named Autamic
habits
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 and other
books
 as marketing
books
. He thinks that if they read more
a
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the
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 opportunity to be a successful person will
increases
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increase
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. Others
,
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apply
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 believe that
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the benifities
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benifities
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benefits
 of
books
related
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are related
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 to
the
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their
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type
 of it.
As many
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 youth who invest their
times
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time
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on
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in
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 reading entertainment
books
 like romantic
books
 find difficulties
on
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in
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their real
relation ships
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relationships
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 with their partners .
For example
, nowadays
a
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the
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 number of divorcees increased among youth especially, in the first year of marriage because of the huge expectations from their partners about how is
a
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true love.If they
don't
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aren't
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 aware of the
type
 of
books
 they read and how are real relationships, they will be
disappointment
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 and fail
instated
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instead
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 of succeeding in their
relation ships
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relationships
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. In conclusion,
Although
, reading
books
 is preferable to some people as
a good habits
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a good habit
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 because they think that it spears their knowledge, others see it depends on the
choose
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choice
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 of the
books
 which they read because some
books
 work on the opposite side of the reader
excepectations
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expectations
 from it. To explain ,he thinks it will help him but in
fact
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fact,
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 it
increased
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increases
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 his
imagining
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 expectations of love from his real partner . In my
opinion
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opinion,
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 it depends on the
type
 of the book
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • mental stimulation
  • knowledge acquisition
  • vocabulary expansion
  • stress reduction
  • memory improvement
  • analytical thinking
  • empathy
  • emotional intelligence
  • social cues
  • constructive content
  • morally uplifting
  • misinformation
  • harmful ideologies
  • critical reading skills
  • credible sources
  • inherently good habit
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