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The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007

The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007
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The given graph illustrates the amount of overseas visitors to three important areas in European
country
Fix the agreement mistake
countries
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 from 1987 to 2007.
Overall
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, it is clear from the graph that there was a significant increase
visiting
Change preposition
in visiting
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on
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apply
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coasts ,
while
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 in 2002 visitors reached their pick
on
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of
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mountains
Correct article usage
the mountains
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.
To begin
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 with,

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overseas visitors
  • number of
  • areas
  • European country
  • between
  • 1987 and 2000
  • graph
  • introduce
  • overview
  • trends
  • describe
  • analyze
  • compare and contrast
  • summarize
  • main findings
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