The bar chart shows the percentage of adults who were overweight or obese in one country from 1965 to 2015. The pie chart shows the proportion of adults who were overweight, obese or severely obese in 2015.

The bar chart shows the percentage of adults who were overweight or obese in one country from 1965 to 2015. The pie chart shows the proportion of adults who were overweight, obese or severely obese in 2015.
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The given column graph compares the
percentage
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of mature that were overweight in one country between 1965 and 2015,
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the pie chart illustrates the weight range of
adult
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adults
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proportion in 2015.
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, the
percentage
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of adults that
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overweight increased from 1985 to 2005,
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in 2015 most of the adults were obese and overweight. It can be seen from the graph,
the
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that the
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percentage
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of increase in overweight was a very small number during the 20 years. After that,
this
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percentage
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began to rise steadily and reached about 70% in 2005.
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, the
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of increase was slightly about approximately three quarters in 2005. The pie chart had 4 different categories for the adult population and one of the biggest percentages was obese, at 34%, in comparison with 31% in overweight.
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,
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healthy and underweight with 29%.
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the lowest
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was severely obese or dangerously fat with 6%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 7 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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