Ordinary people try to copy famous personalities by seeing them on TV or reading about them in the newspapers. What is the reason for this? Is it a good idea to copy famous personalities?
everybody knows that we live in modern times and a lot of
people
following
other folk who are famous. they try to model famous personalities on TV or social media. it has advantages or disadvantages to Wrong verb form
follow
according
following who. That essay discourses about Add the preposition
toaccording
copy
public
are beneficial or not.
Change preposition
to public
one
the one
hand, sometimes trying copy
to people
can be so beneficial. because, when people
were born learning everting
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everything
copy
systems such
as babies. they try to copy
their mother or father. they want will be presented as they are speaking, walking
. there is Correct word choice
or walking
copy
system the nature for people
and they use it every time in their life
. for example
, one
of my friend's sons, his name is Ali and lives in Gaziantep. He try to copy
Michol Jordon to can be a good player like him when he was 10 years old. Ali watched Michol all his matches and try to play like him. Ali is a very successful player in Turkey, he could be successful thanks to his love of basketball and his strategy. the example shows us, if you use to try to copy
people
both side is good for you to learn some things.
on the other hand
, a lot of people
try to copy
famous personalities. they want to be similar wear a dress like him and talk, walk even lifestyle. they towant
live their personality's Correct your spelling
want
life
,not themselves. for instance
, Michal Joran Towant lives like white people
. That's why, he made many operations for his skin makes white. however
, he couldn't do it and he was very ugly a man but he is a good singer
to sum up
, copy
system sometimes
good, sometimes bad. Add a missing verb
is sometimes
people
can forget their life
and try to copy
others. in my opinion, one
day will come people
understand we have only one
life
and i is our life
. that is
why we should stop copying famous people
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