Ordinary people try to copy famous personalities by seeing them on TV or reading about them in the newspapers. What is the reason for this? Is it a good idea to copy famous personalities?

everybody knows that we live in modern times and a lot of
people
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other folk who are famous. they try to model famous personalities on TV or social media. it has advantages or disadvantages to
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following who. That essay discourses about
copy
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are beneficial or not.
one
the
one
hand, sometimes trying
copy
to
people
can be so beneficial. because, when
people
were born learning
everting
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everything
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copy
systems
such
as babies. they try to
copy
their mother or father. they want will be presented as they are speaking,
walking
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. there is
copy
system the nature for
people
and they use it every time in their
life
.
for example
,
one
of my friend's sons, his name is Ali and lives in Gaziantep. He try to
copy
Michol Jordon to can be a good player like him when he was 10 years old. Ali watched Michol all his matches and try to play like him. Ali is a very successful player in Turkey, he could be successful thanks to his love of basketball and his strategy. the example shows us, if you use to try to
copy
people
both side is good for you to learn some things.
on the other hand
, a lot of
people
try to
copy
famous personalities. they want to be similar wear a dress like him and talk, walk even lifestyle. they
towant
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want
live their personality's
life
,not themselves.
for instance
, Michal Joran Towant lives like white
people
. That's why, he made many operations for his skin makes white.
however
, he couldn't do it and he was very ugly a man but he is a good singer
to sum up
,
copy
system
sometimes
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good, sometimes bad.
people
can forget their
life
and try to
copy
others. in my opinion,
one
day will come
people
understand we have only
one
life
and i is our
life
.
that is
why we should stop copying famous
people
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • emulate
  • epitomes
  • self-esteem
  • void
  • lifestyles
  • role models
  • inspiration
  • unrealistic expectations
  • disappointment
  • unique talents
  • superficial
  • material wealth
  • public image
  • personal fulfillment
  • ethical values
  • constructive
  • personal growth
  • values
  • philanthropy
  • resilience
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