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People are shifting their residence to foreign countries .what are the advantages and disadvantages of thin trend?

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An increasing trend in the number of people shifted their residence to other countries.
This
 condition
is occurred
Change to the active voice
occurs
has occurred
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 as it has benefits even though having some drawbacks. People moved their residences for some reason.
Firstly
, they have a promising life in another
country
, usually for their career growth.
Secondly
, the countries offer more advanced infrastructure and facilities for the better life of their descendants. That mentioned reasons somehow could boost their former
country
 to develop more.
On the other hand
, more people leaving their original
country
 for personal reasons could lead to the stagnancy of the former
country
's development. It can be assumed that the person who leaves is the best talent in their
nation
. They should have stayed to help their
nation
 grow. They should be the ones who fix their
nation
's problems, so their
country
 can offer the same promising life. In conclusion,
while
 there are plus points for changing their
nation
, too much would be lost
as a result
. Staying in their original
country
 could boost the
country
's development.
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