The table below illustrates how much money a single person and a couple in Australia need for a comfortable lifestyle after they retire.

The table below illustrates how much money a single person and a couple in Australia need for a comfortable lifestyle after they retire.
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The table compares the budgets needed for retired singles and
couples
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to live a comfortable lifestyle in Australia.
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, the average budget of a retired single person is much lower than that of a
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.
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,
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housing is the biggest expenditure for single retirees, retired
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need more money for leisure activities. The expenditure for housing retired single people is $184, which is $10 lower than that of
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. Meanwhile, singles retirees spend $140 on leisure activities,
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spend $60 more. Regarding healthcare,
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spend $177, which is $50 higher than the expenditure of a single retired person. In terms of transport,
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and singles need roughly the same amount of money, at $108 and $107 respectively. When it comes to clothing, food, and other things, the figure for an individual is almost half that of a
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. A single person spends $44, $50 and $37 respectively on these categories,
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a
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spends $80, $100 and $70. In general, the total amount of money spent by an individual is $684,
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the figure for a
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is $931.
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, the majority of people participating in the survey expected to see improvements in communication between people, 64%,
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only 36% of them thought the opposite. Meanwhile, opinions on food quality were divided almost equally with just over half the survey participants believing that things would improve, and 49% thinking the opposite.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words couples, couple with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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