The bar chart below shows the production of the world's oil in OPEC and Non-OPEC countries. Write a short report for university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The bar chart illustrates how much global oil was produced by OPEC and Non-OPEC countries in three different time periods.
Overall
, it can be seen that only the fuel developed by Non-OPEC
group was an upward trend since the beginning of the period.
Correct article usage
the Non-OPEC
To begin
with, the Non-OPEC was
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initially
started with about 2 barrels
in 1980-2000 and significantly increased until the end
of the period and end
with around 16 barrels
in 2010-2020.
However
, the other categories experienced a downward trend, with 1980-2000 saw
only other OPEC countries ; Wrong verb form
seeing
this
was
generated about 10 Unnecessary verb
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barrels
. There was a dramatic decline in this
category, with only 5 barrels
in next
period and Correct article usage
the next
end
with approximately 1 barrel at the
end
. Likewise
, the in
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middle
east Add an article
the middle
was
started producing Unnecessary verb
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the
Correct article usage
apply
pitrolium
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petroleum
since
2000. The production of Change preposition
in
this
category was almost equal the
other OPEC countries until the Change preposition
to the
end
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words barrels, end with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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