The bar chart below shows the production of the world's oil in OPEC and Non-OPEC countries. Write a short report for university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The bar chart below shows the production of the world's oil in OPEC and Non-OPEC countries.

Write a short report for university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The bar chart illustrates how much global oil was produced by OPEC and Non-OPEC countries in three different time periods.
Overall
, it can be seen that only the fuel developed by
Non-OPEC
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the Non-OPEC
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group was an upward trend since the beginning of the period.
To begin
with, the Non-OPEC
was
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initially
started with about 2
barrels
in 1980-2000 and significantly increased until the
end
of the period and
end
with around 16
barrels
in 2010-2020.
However
, the other categories experienced a downward trend, with 1980-2000
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only other OPEC countries ;
this
was
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generated about 10
barrels
. There was a dramatic decline in
this
category, with only 5
barrels
in
next
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the next
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period and
end
with approximately 1 barrel
at the
end
.
Likewise
, the
in
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middle
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east
was
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started producing
the
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pitrolium
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petroleum
since
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in
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2000. The production of
this
category was almost equal
the
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other OPEC countries until the
end
.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Bar chart
  • World oil production
  • OPEC (Organization of Petroleum Exporting Countries)
  • Non-OPEC countries
  • Trends
  • Data analysis
  • Comparison
  • Oil reserves
  • Barrels per day
  • Percentage share
  • Production capacity
  • Fluctuate
  • Peak
  • Rise/increase
  • Decline/decrease
  • Over time
  • Crude oil
  • Export
  • Market dynamics
  • Energy sector
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