A friend told you recently that he/she had gone to an excellent restaurant. You wonder if this restaurant will be suitable for your birthday party next week. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter tell your friend about your planned party ask what the restaurant is called and for directions to get there ask what kind of food it serves and if your friend has any particular recommendations from the men

Dear Pat,
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you and your family are doing well. I wish we can meet soon in the near future. I am so glad to hear from you regarding your experience in
this
restaurant. I would like you to share with me more information about
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place. As we may know, I am planning to arrange my
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party next week, and I am wondering whether
this
avenue would be suitable for my birthday.
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, I would like to ask you about the restaurant's name and the location to go there tomorrow. I think I need to take
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clear overview of the place before deciding. I believe you know that I prefer
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cuisine. So, what sorts of dishes they are serving there? and whether you have particular advice from the menu
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In addition
, do you have any idea whether they can prepare a customized birthday cake? I would really appreciate your help. Take care and I am looking forward to your reply soon. Sincerely, AYA
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