Why are more people living alone in cities? Why is this the case? Is this a positive or a negative development?

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IN RECENT TIMES WE CAN SEE THAT MAXIMUM NUMBER OF INDIVIDUALS ARE PREFERING TO LIVE ALL BY THEMSELVES IN CITIES
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AS FINANCIAL INDEPENDENCE, FREEDOM OF CHOICE AND ACHIEVING THE GOALS.
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IN THE ,EASSAY WE WILL LOOK INTO THE ASPECTS OF IT BEING A BOON OR A CURSE TO THE INDIVIDUALS IN THEIR GROWTH. THE 20TH CENTURY HAS BROUGHT DRASTIC CHANGES IN THE WAY OF LIFE WHICH HAS IMPACTED ON PEOPLE TO TAKE STEPS TO UPGRADE THEIR QUALITY OF LIFE. IN
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DAY AND AGE PEOPLE PREFER LIVING ALONE IN BIGGER CITIES TO EXPLORE DIFFERENT ASPECTS LIKE MANAGING THEIR FINANCES, HAVING A LARGER SOCIAL CIRCLE, FOLLOWING A STRICT DIET AND FITNESS, FREEDOM IN THE CHOICES TO MAKE. PEOPLE WANT TO MOVE OUT OF THEIR PARENT'S HOUSE TO LEARN TO TAKE COGNITIVE DECISIONS ALL BY THEMSELVES.
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, WHEN I WAS 18 YEARS OLD IN THE UK, I MOVED OUT OF MY PARENT'S HOUSE BECAUSE I WANTED TO FOCUS ON MY CAREER, TAKING SOLE RESPONSIBILITY FOR MY EXPENSES AND MAINTAINING EXTEND MY SOCIAL CIRCLE. FROM MY POINT OF VIEW
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IS DEFINITELY A POSITIVE DEVELOPMENT BECAUSE WHEN WE LIVE ALONE THERE WILL BE A LOT OF TIME TO SPEND ON, THROUGH WHICH WE CAN MAKE NEW FRIENDS AND BE MORE SOCIAL. FOR A CLEAN AND HEALTHY LIVING
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THE BEST WAY SINCE WE WOULD LEARN TO COOK OUR MEALS AND MANAGE THE EXPENSES
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, A PERSON LIVING ALONE WILL FOCUS MORE ON THEIR CAREER, TAKE GOOD CARE OF THEIR HEALTH, MAKE MORE FRIENDS AND WILL LEARN TO TAKE DECISIONS IN THEIR LIFE
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A PERSON LIVING WITH THEIR FAMILY WILL BE IN A PROTECTED ENVIRONMENT AND THERE WOULD BE NO FREEDOM TO TAKE THEIR DECISIONS.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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