Why are more people living alone in cities? Why is this the case? Is this a positive or a negative development?

IN RECENT TIMES WE CAN SEE THAT MAXIMUM NUMBER OF INDIVIDUALS ARE PREFERING TO LIVE ALL BY THEMSELVES IN CITIES

DUE TO

MANY FACTORS

SUCH

AS FINANCIAL INDEPENDENCE, FREEDOM OF CHOICE AND ACHIEVING THE GOALS.

FURTHER

IN THE ,EASSAY WE WILL LOOK INTO THE ASPECTS OF IT BEING A BOON OR A CURSE TO THE INDIVIDUALS IN THEIR GROWTH. THE 20TH CENTURY HAS BROUGHT DRASTIC CHANGES IN THE WAY OF LIFE WHICH HAS IMPACTED ON PEOPLE TO TAKE STEPS TO UPGRADE THEIR QUALITY OF LIFE. IN

THIS

DAY AND AGE PEOPLE PREFER LIVING ALONE IN BIGGER CITIES TO EXPLORE DIFFERENT ASPECTS LIKE MANAGING THEIR FINANCES, HAVING A LARGER SOCIAL CIRCLE, FOLLOWING A STRICT DIET AND FITNESS, FREEDOM IN THE CHOICES TO MAKE. PEOPLE WANT TO MOVE OUT OF THEIR PARENT'S HOUSE TO LEARN TO TAKE COGNITIVE DECISIONS ALL BY THEMSELVES.

FOR EXAMPLE

, WHEN I WAS 18 YEARS OLD IN THE UK, I MOVED OUT OF MY PARENT'S HOUSE BECAUSE I WANTED TO FOCUS ON MY CAREER, TAKING SOLE RESPONSIBILITY FOR MY EXPENSES AND MAINTAINING EXTEND MY SOCIAL CIRCLE. FROM MY POINT OF VIEW

THIS

IS DEFINITELY A POSITIVE DEVELOPMENT BECAUSE WHEN WE LIVE ALONE THERE WILL BE A LOT OF TIME TO SPEND ON, THROUGH WHICH WE CAN MAKE NEW FRIENDS AND BE MORE SOCIAL. FOR A CLEAN AND HEALTHY LIVING

THIS

ALSO

THE BEST WAY SINCE WE WOULD LEARN TO COOK OUR MEALS AND MANAGE THE EXPENSES

ACCORDINGLY

FOR EXAMPLE

, A PERSON LIVING ALONE WILL FOCUS MORE ON THEIR CAREER, TAKE GOOD CARE OF THEIR HEALTH, MAKE MORE FRIENDS AND WILL LEARN TO TAKE DECISIONS IN THEIR LIFE

WHEREAS

A PERSON LIVING WITH THEIR FAMILY WILL BE IN A PROTECTED ENVIRONMENT AND THERE WOULD BE NO FREEDOM TO TAKE THEIR DECISIONS.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Why are more people living alone in cities? Why is this the case? Is this a positive or a negative development?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Spoken communication is more powerful than written communication”. Do you agree or disagree?

In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve everything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of communicating this message to children?

Loneliness is an increasing problem in many societies, especially among the elderly. Why is this? How might it be remedied?

the pie chartbelow shows the main reason why agriculture land become less productive. the taable shows how these causes effected three regions of the eorld during the 1990s.

An increasing number of people are now using dating sites to meet their sencond halves . Do you think that this tendency help people to socialize or does more harm tthan good ? Give your opinon