The diagram below shows process for recycling platic bottles

The diagram below shows process for recycling platic bottles
The diagram illustrates visual data about the steps taken in order to make
sugar
from
sugar
cane.
Overall
, the process has seven stages, and it starts when the
sugar
canes grow.
To begin
, the
sugar
canes grow for 12 to 18 months, and when they are grown, the harvesting stage begins. They can be harvested by hand, or the process can be done by specific machines. When the harvesting part is done, the
sugar
canes are crushed by a machine, in order to produce juice. Having been purified, the juice
then
is put into a container to boil and become syrup. When the juice turns into syrup, it is put in a centrifuge which leads to the separation of
sugar
crystals from the syrup.
Following
this
, the separated
sugar
crystals will be put in a container to get dry and cool, and
this
is the final stage of the process.
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