The diagram below shows process for recycling platic bottles

The diagram below shows process for recycling platic bottles
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The diagram illustrates visual data about the steps taken in order to make
sugar
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from
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cane.
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, the process has seven stages, and it starts when the
sugar
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canes grow.
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, the
sugar
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canes grow for 12 to 18 months, and when they are grown, the harvesting stage begins. They can be harvested by hand, or the process can be done by specific machines. When the harvesting part is done, the
sugar
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canes are crushed by a machine, in order to produce juice. Having been purified, the juice
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is put into a container to boil and become syrup. When the juice turns into syrup, it is put in a centrifuge which leads to the separation of
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crystals from the syrup.
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this
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, the separated
sugar
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crystals will be put in a container to get dry and cool, and
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is the final stage of the process.
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