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The diagram illustrates visual data about the steps taken in order to make

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from

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cane.

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, the process has seven stages, and it starts when the

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canes grow.

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, the

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canes grow for 12 to 18 months, and when they are grown, the harvesting stage begins. They can be harvested by hand, or the process can be done by specific machines. When the harvesting part is done, the

sugar

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canes are crushed by a machine, in order to produce juice. Having been purified, the juice

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is put into a container to boil and become syrup. When the juice turns into syrup, it is put in a centrifuge which leads to the separation of

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crystals from the syrup.

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this

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, the separated

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crystals will be put in a container to get dry and cool, and

this

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is the final stage of the process.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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The diagram below shows process for recycling platic bottles

Children today spend too much time playing on screens and not enough time doing physical activity. We need to get rid of our children’s devices to avoid severe strains on our health system in the future. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Nowadays, full-time university students tend to focus on their studying. Some people think it is essential for university students to be involved in other activities too. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some argue younger people are not suitable for important positions in the government, while others think is a good idea. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?