In order to study effectively, it requires comfort, peace and time. So it is impossible for a student to combine learning and employment at the same time because one distracts the other. Is it realistic to combine them at the same time? Support your opinion with examples.

In

this

current world, most of the

students

undertake studies and

employment

simultaneously. Whilst some

people

think that it is impossible to

study

during

employment

.

However

, it depends on

people

’s needs, whether they need money to continue their college or simply because they want to gain the knowledge to enhance their careers . On my point of view, there is

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the positive

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and negative side of how

people

combine both student life and

employment

because of several reasons.

Firstly

, some

people

do have problems

in

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managing their

study

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studies

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along with

the

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employment

.

For instance

, some

students

more need time to absorb the lessons from their lecturer and they need

further

study

to

instill

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theories inside their

mind

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. Other than that, there is an enormous amount of work from the office which can distract

students

’ concentration and affect the bad result in the final

assesment

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assessment

.

This

issue made several companies in Indonesia create a policy for

students

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to focus on their

study

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, they can have education leave within the timeframe given by the college.

Furthermore

, to

study

effectively, it is necessary in a comfortable and

quite

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quiet

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place.

On the other hand

, there are many

people

who continue their

study

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studies

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while

working because of expensive college fees.

Therefore

, the

advantages

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of being employed

while

studying is the

students

able to experience

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the validity

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of the theory by connecting their practical experience.

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, it is more easily to answer examinations with practical scenarios with work experience. In conclusion, the effectiveness and efficiency of studying

while

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an employee

depends

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on

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an individuals

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individuals

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ability, strength, and preference.