The following diagram illustrates how the recycling of waste paper is treated.

The following diagram illustrates how the recycling of waste paper is treated.
The diagram describes the process of treating
of
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recycling
waste
paper
.
Overall
, the process consists of six steps, starting with collecting the
waste
paper
from
public
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the public
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and ending up with
manufacture
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the manufacture
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of usable
paper
from
waste
paper
. The first
steps
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to treat the
waste
paper
is to collect the
waste
paper
from public
paper
banks and from businesses after collecting
paper
is sorted by hand in
this
steps
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paper
is graded, suitable
paper
is kept and unsuitable
paper
removed
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. The next process is
transport
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the
paper
to
paper
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the paper
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mill.
Onces
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delivery
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to
paper
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mill
then
, cleaning, pulping and removal of other materials like staples
is
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done in milk.
Then
,
removal
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the removal
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of inks and glues from
paper
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the paper
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are
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done
this
method is called
de- inking
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.
Then
finally
paper
making machine manufacture
of
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usable
paper
from wasted
paper
then
,
it
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and it
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is ready to reuse again and sell in the market.
this
is
good
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a good
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way to reuse
the
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wasted
paper
and decrease global warming.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, paper with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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