The following diagram illustrates how the recycling of waste paper is treated.
The diagram describes the process of treating
of
recycling Change preposition
apply
waste
paper
.
Overall
, the process consists of six steps, starting with collecting the waste
paper
from public
and ending up with Correct article usage
the public
manufacture
of usable Add an article
the manufacture
paper
from waste
paper
.
The first steps
to treat the Fix the agreement mistake
step
waste
paper
is to collect the waste
paper
from public paper
banks and from businesses after collecting paper
is sorted by hand in this
steps
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step
paper
is graded, suitable paper
is kept and unsuitable paper
removed
. The next process is Add a missing verb
is removed
transport
the Wrong verb form
transporting
paper
to paper
mill.
Add an article
the paper
a paper
Onces
Correct your spelling
Once
delivery
to Replace the word
delivered
paper
mill Correct article usage
the paper
then
, cleaning, pulping and removal of other materials like staples is
done in milk. Change the verb form
are
Then
, removal
of inks and glues from Correct article usage
the removal
paper
Correct article usage
the paper
are
done Correct subject-verb agreement
is
this
method is called de- inking
. Correct your spelling
de-inking
Then
finally
paper
making machine manufacture of
usable Change preposition
apply
paper
from wasted paper
then
, it
is ready to reuse again and sell in the market.Correct word choice
and it
this
is good
way to reuse Add an article
a good
the
wasted Correct article usage
apply
paper
and decrease global warming.Submitted by pooja.rijal11 on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, paper with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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