Opinions on food are changing rapidly and there are many who believe that everyone chould follow a vegetarian diet because it would have a positive impact in our health and the environment. Do you agree or disagree?

Today it is considered that
everyone
should be a vegetarian because it is beneficial for our
well – being
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and environment. I
am fully disagree
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with
this
statement and think that following
vegetarian
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a vegetarian
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diet
should be a
choice
of
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for
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every people. First of all,
meat
considers many micro and macro elements, that
necessary
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are necessary
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for our body.
In other words
,
meat
have
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has
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a high nutritional value and
every day
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everyday
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meal ration will not be fully complex without
meat
and other animal products. In
this
case, any vegetables or vegan alternatives
of
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meat
cannot be a source of vitamins and nutritious elements as good as natural
meat
.
For example
,
meat
consists
Ca
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, K, Na and other healthy components, that guarantee people`s physical development.
Thus
,
meat
cannot be excluded from our
diet
.
Secondly
,
vegetarian
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a vegetarian
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diet
should be a
choice
. Not
everyone
ready
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is ready
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to cancel
meat
from his or her ration.
While
we live in
democratic
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the democratic
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world, where people have
right
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the right
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of voice and
choice
, no one can do them to change their
diet
.
In addition
,
vegetarian
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a vegetarian
the vegetarian
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diet
is not suitable for everybody.
For instance
, people with blood and pancreatic diseases and pregnant women need
meat
to keep themselves healthy and strong.
That is
why not
everyone
can be vegetarian.
To sum up
,
vegetarian
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a vegetarian
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diet
is not appropriate for
everyone
due to
the nutritional value of
meat
and
personal
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the personal
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choice
of every human being
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