Stress related illnesses are becoming increasingly common. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Nowadays, the percentage of people who suffer from

stress

is increasing drastically.

This

phenomenon may be caused by different aspects, and

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essay displays my personal point of view

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why

this

could happen and how some points assist to fix

this

issue. First of all, I would argue that

this

problem

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by mental illnesses. The primary reason why mentality holds an important role is that the state of mind affects physical performance. A famous quote "In the healthy body, there is

healthy

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mind" proves that mental well-being is an essential aspect for humans and it is a

high-priority

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to be preserved.

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, most

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high school students today are struggling with heavy

stress

.

This

is a serious

problem

to deal with because many people now are trapped within

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drama.

Thus

,

counselors

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in school may assist to overcome

this

dilemma since they are

professional

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within

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this

case.

Moreover

, the secondary reason why various individuals struggle with

stress

is the pressure from

surrounding

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. Many

of

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parents demand their children

to

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be something more by rising them toughly which

lead

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leads

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them to

having

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serious

stress

in

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their

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daily basis. Take most

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children as

example

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. They are

rised

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raised

by

stricted

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strict

rules and demands. Numbers of Asian parents sign their children in thigh-curricula school causing them to deal with massive schedules.

However

, parent's acknowledgement is needed to fix

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. They need to provide some space for their

youngs

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to figure out. In conclusion,

although

stress

is caused by many aspects it

also

comes with

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a solution

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solution

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because

stress

is

a

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number one

problem

to fight since it affects human physical

strenght

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strength

to build

modern

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a modern

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society.