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Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving a car or motorbike. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Obtaining a
car
 at
this
 point in time is becoming increasingly affordable. Some people believe that increasing the minimum legal
age
 in driving a vehicle, will
then
 reduce cases of road
accidents
. I strongly disagree that legal
age
 has anything to do with
car
accidents
.
This
 essay will explain why other measures are inherently better than other methods.
To begin
 with, it should not be surprising that a lot of people own a
car
.
Firstly
, knowing how to drive is a huge advantage, especially these days, since it is much more practical knowing how to drive and have a
driver
's license.
For example
, having one is an edge in landing a job. It can
also
 increase
self confidence
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 for some people.
Moreover
,
accidents
 are happening not because of the
age
 of the
driver
, but
due to
 their behaviour.
Furthermore
, Even the most careful drivers can still be involved in an accident once they encounter a reckless
driver
 on the street.
Also
, one reason for these
accidents
, is that more cars on the road equals higher risks for mishaps. The government should impose
a
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strict traffic regulations that the motorist must follow.
Furthermore
, they can
instead
 increase
car
 tax.
As well as
 requiring
car
 owners to have their own garage before having the right to own a
car
 is another good proposition.
Additionally
,
government
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 can collaborate with
car
 dealers on giving stricter requirements
on
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 customers.
To conclude
, I believe that
age
 has nothing to do with the increasing cases of traffic
accidents
 but
due to
 the behaviour of the
driver
.
Thus
, it is crucial for the government to intervene and implement
a
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much more reliable traffic regulations.
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