The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
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The pie chart describes, the destination of Anthropology
graduates
from a university after their undergraduate completion and the table compares, the salaries of those Use synonyms
graduates
in Use synonyms
work
after five years.
To summarize, almost half Use synonyms
percentage
of the Anthropology Correct article usage
the percentage
graduates
were placed in full-time Use synonyms
work
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work
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unemployed
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were unemployed
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the rest of them are negligible. The salaries after 5 years are Linking Words
tremendous
changed for all the three types of employment, the government sector stood first in it.
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in Anthropology, 52% of students were placed in full-time Replace the word
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work
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while
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work
and unemployed respectively. Use synonyms
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witnessed with 5%. On the flip side, the status unknown and full-time postgraduate study was balanced by 5%.
The salaries of anthropologists after 5 years for freelance consultants and the government sector were 5% and 15% in the range of $25000 to $49999 and $50,000 to $74,999 orderly, Linking Words
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40% each in $75,000 to $99,999 and above that for freelance consultants. Linking Words
Further
, in the government sector anthropologists salaried 30% and 50% in the proportion of $75,000 to $99,999 and more than $100,000. Linking Words
Likewise
, the private companies were 25% and 30%. Linking Words
On the contrary
, the private companies pay 10% and 35% for the other two ranges.Linking Words
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