Some people claim that not enough of the waste from home is recycled. They say that the onlt way to increase recycling is for government to make a legal requirment. To what extend do you think laws are needed to make people recycled more of their watse.

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Nowadays
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tend to be more aware of
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global warming. Many want to take some
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it. One easiest
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that everyone can do is to recycle their used product at home. But it
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like there is only a small number of houses that really take
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action
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. Some
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that the government should publish a law to
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inhabitants to recycle more of their unwanted waste. In the following
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I will be discussed
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the reasons why I do not agree with
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, if the
governments
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really
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a legal requirement for
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to take
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on recycling their own waste, it would not
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in the long term.
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to solve the edge of the problem but not the cause of it.
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, I personally
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that the right
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to encourage
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to
recycling
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is to educate them with the knowledge of what benefits the environment will get by doing the recycle.
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, with
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of solving, the inhabitants can understand more about the crisis that
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global warming
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in
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modern times.
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, Government can provide
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effective
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to encourage
people
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by creating a campaign or even creating a Station where
people
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can give their
recycle
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waste and trade it into money to help them all the
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to keep collecting the unwanted ways in the home. In conclusion, I
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that it
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on the majority of
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people
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responsibility but what government can do to increase the recycling
to
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action
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can be done by other creative options rather than a legal requirement.
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