The qualities a person needs to become truly successful in today's world cannot be learned at a university or similar academic institution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Dear friend, I am writing
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intend to describe to you a new kind of sport which
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explored for myself and probably for you is vastly interesting. As
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remember you wrote to me that you like running and walking so football will suit you a lot.Presently the most popular kind of sport with an enormous budget and an immense amount of followers in the universe.In comparison with complex kinds
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as a chees or baseball ,you are able to learn rules within one day.Soccer combines team games and active leisure which is preventing cardiovascular diseases and making your body fitter.In ,addition
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moreover
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your body produces adrenaline
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you do not feel
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. In
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want to say that
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will a pleasurable to you if we begin training together next week,
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our English rapidly enhances ,and our friendship will get stronger. Hope you will agree.
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