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The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050.

The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050.
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The provided table gives data relating to the population of four countries, namely Argentina,
Indonesia
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, Italy, and the Republic of Korea in 2003 and predictions for 2025 and 2050. The unit is given in
million
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. From an
overall
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 perspective, there will be a downward tendency in the population of Italy,
while
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 the residents'
proportion
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 of
Indonesia
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 will rise enormously. Looking at the table meticulously, it can be seen that the number of Argentina citizens displayed the lowest level in all years and countries, depicting 34
million
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 in 2003. At the same time, the highest
proportion
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 was in
Indonesia
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 culminating at 238
million
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 residents.
Furthermore
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, the
proportion
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 of Argentina and
Indonesia
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 will have climbed to 32 and 312
million
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 respectively, in 2050. From the table, it can be inferred that the number Republic of Korea's residents will have risen to only 4
million
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 over the period of almost 5 decades.
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, the population figure of the Republic of Korea will reach a plateau between 2025 and 2050, accounting for 52
million
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.
In contrast
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, the
proportion
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 of Italy's citizens will have decreased gradually by 2050, which will depict 45
million
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.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 4 times.
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