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Some government spend a lot of public fund on training people to be successful in international sporting events. Some people believe that this money should be spent on things that will benefit the general public. To what extent do you agree?

#government #fund #people #events #money #benefit
THE CHART CONSISTS OF
DATAS REALATING
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DATA RELATING
 TO THE REVOLUTIONS OF HOUSE FARES IN FIVE DIFFERENT CITIES WHICH ARE NEW YORK,MADRID,TOKYO,FRANKFURT AND LONDON.THE CHART COVERS THE CHANGES IN
PERCENTAGE
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THE PERCENTAGE
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ON
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 THE
PRICES
 AT AVERAGE FROM 1990 TO 2002 COMPARED WITH THE AVERAGE HOUSE
PRICES
 IN 1989.THE CHANGES ARE GIVEN BY AVERAGE.
OVERALL
,THE CHANGES
OF
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 HOUSE
PRICES
 IN PERCENTAGES INCREASED CLEARLY EXCEPT IN FRANKFURT.
OTHERWISE
,THE LARGEST INCREASE ON THE CHART BELONGED TO LONDON AMONG THE CITIES.
TO BEGIN
 WITH,IN 1990-1995,THE
PRICES
 IN NEW YORK INCREASED %10 AND
IT
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THEY
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 ROSE FROM %-5 TO %5 DURING THE NEXT SIX YEARS (1996-2002).
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MADRID AND TOKYO HAD THE SAME PERCENTAGE CHANGE ALMOST %2 AND APPROXIMATELY ROSE FROM %2 AND %-7 ( TO %4 AND TO -5% RESPECTIVELY).
AS WELL AS
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 FRANKFURT WAS THE ONLY COUNTRY WHICH HAD
DECREASE
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A DECREASE
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ON
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 THE PERCENTAGE LIKE ALMOST BY HALF FROM %2 TO %.
FINALLY
, LONDON HAD A HUGE CHANGE AND IT CLIMBED SIGNIFICANTLY ABOUT %20.IT WAS NEARLY -8% BETWEEN 1990-1995 AND
THIS
 RATE UPDATED AS ALMOST %12 IN 1996-2002.
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